The story is fast paced with little detail to its environment and the characters in it, but good, the writer simply needs more experience writing and to learn to slow the stories she tells down. Catchy otherwise.

Oh jesus this was a rollercoaster! So much jealousy and anger and selfishness its insane. Logan gets on my lasttt nerves ugh! Poor emma may she heal soon and leave all this toxic love behind.

The preview was so good that I had to buy the book but it is so short, it ends on a cliff hanger and you have to buy the next book to continue :(. I have a feeling it will be like that until I buy all 4 book, but overall great read.

This “Book 1” isn’t even a complete story; it’s merely the beginning of one and doesn’t provide a semblance of a conclusion or cliffhanger, it just ends. I kept swiping my iPad for the next page and the ‘buy the next book’ kept coming up. I actually double checked my download to make sure I had the entire book. Unfortunately, this was it, 208 pages of incomplete storytelling. $4.99 for an incomplete book with options to purchase the remaining books at $4.99 is ridiculous. If it takes 6 parts to complete ONE story, the reader will have to pay nearly $30. I have purchased books with completed storylines from better known and more widely read authors for less than half that. This book rates $.99 for each installment because the plot is interesting despite disjointed writing.

Weird that I paid to read the book and then am not allowed to read it without leaving a review. I’m not sure that I’ll even keep reading it. It’s really dragging right now and the conversations are patronizing and repeating. It’s getting pretty boring. Wait, I think that’s the end of the book! Haha! That’s funny. Is that really the end? What a weird ending!

The idea is great, the way the author didn’t separate paragraphs is. A huge red flag. I can’t get a refund but if I could I would be taking it.

The plot of the story was hopeful, but the grammatical errors and poor dialogue made the plot less convincing. It’s almost as if the story wasn’t edited before being published.

Story is ok. Very similar storyline to ones of this genre. However, it’s misleading as one book broken into 6 so that you end up paying $33 to finish one story. More expensive than buying a hard back book new. Read 1st ‘book’ did not find it worth while to continue buying the other 5. 1st ends abruptly, possibly, mid chapter.

There’s a few things like a couple of words that are out of context. The story is fast moving somewhat and it does make you want to continue reading. I wish these books weren’t split up like they are, but if the second book is the good as the first book, I probably will continue reading the series.

The storyline was decent but execution was disappointing. The settings and characters are flat, and there's very little time spent describing settings. Mostly shorter choppy sentences saying who said what or did what. The way the dialogue was written was also weird and mechanical. Lots of typos and grammar problems too.