Extremely repetitive with descriptions of surroundings & boring dialogue! Could not finish the book!

Suspenseful, well written,a writer that uses words to paint pictures. No foul language no unnecessary sex. Words to make a picture in your mind, suspense to keep you reading. Two people that want real justice not political desires brought to fruition.

In the 11 pages I read I found 19 examples of poor grammar, conflicting analogies, overly flowery descriptions and repeated ideas. It’s free, but not worth the price!

Felt like I was reading the same page over and over again.

Great book

Really good plot a bit slow in beginning and an awesome conclusion! Thanks k

It’s not badly written, but it is very over written. We don’t need a description of every single shadow in the room, and how it mirrors the darkness in his soul, or a description of every single sound of footsteps, or a phone ringing, and how it mirrors the emptiness in his soul. We get it - he’s haunted. We don’t need to be told 10 different ways in every single paragraph.

Repetitive and flowery. Couldn’t finish (and I almost always finish any book I start).l

The story was great, but I was distracted by the numerous typos and errors not caught in proofreading. Should I send them in? All I can think to do is screenshot pages with highlights?