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  • Short

    5
    By velvet Search
    Definitely too short. Well written
  • No editing?

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    By Parental74
    Either terrible AI used to edit or terrible writing skills. Physician who wrote letter was Dr. Dodge, another chapter in he’s called Dr. Blackthorn then back to Dodge. Main character just moves to town and less than a day in is talking about townspeople as though living there years. She calls her friend Jen then - nothing until remembering her at the very end with no real info on her, just at end saying “she was always there for me”. She jumps to memorial ceremony for one of many victims (don’t know who?) and laughs after with cop in poor taste that a solstice event probably shouldn’t happen (because of sacrifices that upset the town after earlier expressing empathy for them?). Seriously, I’ve read dozens of mysteries from many authors and this is at the bottom with the worst as though a 4th grader tried to write it with a limit of 100 pages to work with. Terrible attention deficit discombobulated writing with poor editing. Definitely will not be reading any others in this series.

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