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By Penelope Pea
This book is all over the place, nothing connects, it’ll go from one scenario to another 6~10 pages later (keeping you flipping back pages to see what you missed!) wording doubles and triples the same wording and you can’t follow more, Finally gave up on page 191! It does have potential, but how has this not been edited properly? Make some major corrections and I’ll change my review! Sorry