Wise people always advise <br />To keep mum and surprise <br />With no comments <br />This is biggest achievement <br /> <br />Even friends feel bad <br />When they are not adored <br />Given few words of praise <br />Or some sweet appreciation of face <br /> <br />This can be understood <br />From simple fact that we are all good <br />But alas! Governed by human weakness <br />We need no bitter test but only sweetness <br /> <br /> I can understand when read through comments <br />There is some change along with improvement <br />It will be best service if we confine to poet's creation <br />And not showing simple favor by daily praising relation <br /> <br />Gold needs no polishing as it has its own worth <br />Human life needs no praises as may become known only after death <br />Flowers too may fade with season's show <br />We all are mature enough to think and grow <br /> <br />Pick one good point whether one likes or not <br />Weave it in ornamental way for attention to be caught <br />The poem may get additional flavor and praise <br />There may be some more unknown ways too<br /><br />hasmukh amathalal<br /><br />http://www.poemhunter.com/poem/feel-bad/
