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Laura Cummings - Bad W riting

2014-11-07 6 Dailymotion

“E-nun-ci-ate! ” screaming at the top of lungs, <br />Speak correctly or keep your mouth shut. <br />“Spell check! ” You’ve spelt that wrong what’s the matter with you? <br />Rips out the page before yelling to start over. <br /> <br />“What is this crap? It makes no sense! You can’t die at the hand of a thousand men. <br />Take it out, learn life and don’t come back until you’ve learnt something better to write. <br />Crying about death and loneliness, singing about love and sex, you haven’t lived…. <br />This is bad writing- not to your full potential.” <br /> <br />Disappointment, angst… not what life is about? Love, marriage, sex, and war – all empty. <br /> <br />Where is the line? I try to see, but where it is, is never clear to me. <br /> <br />Bonnefide case of SSDD. <br /> <br />“Good writing? Bad writing? Stop writing random crap and write from the heart. Write from the soul. Still bad writing? Go away. Don’t come back. Try a hand at something else.<br /><br />Laura Cummings<br /><br />http://www.poemhunter.com/poem/bad-w-riting/

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