Give me work to do <br />Show me how to do it <br />If i fail to do it <br />Punish me severely. <br /> <br />Give me a query to answer <br />Deny me of my rightful position <br />If you feel i am wrong <br />But do not use bad comments. <br /> <br />Give me grass to cut <br />Show me how to cut it <br />If i fail to cut it <br />Beat me blue black <br /> <br />Give me books to read <br />Manhandle me mercilessly <br />If i fail to read them <br />But do not use bad comments <br /> <br />Bad comments are like arrows <br />Shot at the heart <br />It pierces through to the mind <br />And wounds the healthy soul <br /> <br />It is never forgotten <br />It glitters as the stars <br />It burns as the fire <br />And rekindles the mind <br /> <br />When ever the commentor comes <br />It is remembered <br />He said this about me <br />I will never forgive him <br /> <br />Never give bad comments <br />About somebody <br />It is easily remembered <br />It is an ever green wound <br />Given to the healthy soul.<br /><br />micheal udenyi<br /><br />http://www.poemhunter.com/poem/bad-comments/