When I checked on my poems <br />A surprise was there <br />And it concerned me so <br />That I gripped my hair <br /> <br />Someone had gone through <br />And rated all low <br />I guess they don't like them <br />But still, even so <br /> <br />I wonder why they hated them? <br />I wonder what gives? <br />I wish I could find out <br />Where that person lives <br /> <br />I'd knock on their door <br />And ask to come in <br />And ask for some help <br />For some new way to spin <br /> <br />All the poems they rated <br />A two or a one <br />I'd ask what was wrong <br />And what can be done<br /><br />Laura Kiernan<br /><br />http://www.poemhunter.com/poem/1-0-2/
