Step lightly here; <br />Words below: <br />Adverbs too. <br /> <br />Be ginger with the Sentences; <br />Note: the Clauses have so much Ego. <br /> <br />Oh, let's not talk Punctuation, <br />the pickiness makes for unrelating. <br /> <br />I have had a personal thing about <br />the Pluperfect Tense, <br />before I learned to get it right- <br />I think. <br /> <br />Now, I do like the Action Verbs <br />they stand out. <br />But the Hyperbolic Adjectives are overused, <br />don't you think? <br /> <br />The pronouns are the worse. <br />Especially the 'I' <br />IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII <br />They even look like prison bars, <br />so limiting I think. <br /> <br />The 'G' is great. <br />Looks friendly; rather like it's waving. <br />Well, you get the idea. <br /> <br />Have to go you know <br />Here comes Mr. Period. <br />He is so rigid. <br />He thinks everything <br />begins and ends <br />with him.<br /><br />Lonnie Hicks<br /><br />http://www.poemhunter.com/poem/poetries/
