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hasmukh amathalal - No advice, please

2014-11-10 1 Dailymotion

Do we need any type of advice from others? <br />Why other’s plight concern us and bother? <br />Are those concern only meant to be lip services? <br />Not to learn any for self from other’s misses <br /> <br />It has remained custom and merely a tradition <br />Purely academic interest without any condition <br />Sometimes fuel passion and serve as ignition <br />Thought blasts within without any ammunition <br /> <br />Catching the nerve point and it hurts us most <br />Simple dose of solace which means nothing in cost <br />It may be conceded at given point of time and heeded <br />Some more concrete action is often needed <br /> <br />It may invite ire when hollow promises are given <br />Increase in plights and condition horribly driven <br />Person may loose temper and hurl simple abuses <br />Everybody may turn down advise or refuse <br /> <br />It is not necessary to render it free <br />People may avoid and some times flee <br />Your presence may invite mixed response <br />Some may term it useless and even nonsense <br /> <br />You may feel bad but not react badly <br />Displeasure may be shown and accepted very sadly <br />If you can draw the lesson and read as judgment <br />Insult may be avoided for that very moment <br /> <br />It is better to render where it is needed <br />Hundred percent sure that it will be heeded <br />Valuable points may be noted and conceded <br />Concern and unnecessary worries may be receded <br /> <br />It will serve as medicine and immediate relief <br />Fast recovery and strengthening the belief <br />May enlighten the person with full confidence <br />Advice may have more weight with earning credence<br /><br />hasmukh amathalal<br /><br />http://www.poemhunter.com/poem/no-advice-please/

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