My expression in this poem became quite mechanical due to maintenance of iambic pentameter throughout the poem. <br /> <br />I knew your pain as I love you so much, <br />I can feel your depth of unspoken love, <br />I wonder what joy your bonding can fetch- <br />Truly pleasure of life filled with love. <br /> <br />Without you with whom I shall share my love? <br />It is very hard to interpret my tale, <br />Nobody has time for understanding love, <br />All they know is cheap love stories for sale. <br /> <br />Grey rain drops reminded me silent tears, <br />That fell on your cheeks while going abroad, <br />My world was suddenly filled with fears, <br />Hope to marry you reached end of the road. <br /> <br />Take me to the nice place where you have gone, <br />Or else, I shall wait for you, dear woman.<br /><br />Biswajit Ganguly<br /><br />http://www.poemhunter.com/poem/love-life-a-shakespearean-sonnet/
