Dear Roddy, <br />I'm getting there! This iteration nears the 3-minute mark + I deliver it more smoothly & with more expression. <br /><br />I think my "pay-offs" are: <br />• God speaking to you? = anticipatory set <br />• In the Sultanate of Oman <br />• Getting a research contract to lead an Arab team <br />• Dr. Shawki's heart attack <br />• Fetal Position & Voice of God <br />• Opening Bible to Jeremiah / message <br />• Never alone. He knows who & where we are... <br /><br />I would stilll ike to smile more & have more of my personality shine through. What recommendations do you have to improve this version of my story? <br /><br />Thanks for your continued support and encouragement! <br />As we seek the extraordinary.... <br />Dorothy <br /><br />Dorothy Guy Bonvillain
